Disgaea 3 - A hero? appears

I've been reading a lot about D3. The scene were Almaz appears thinking Mao and Raspberyl was in trouble (or something like that). Anyway, pg 01. I might color pg 02. And Mao sees an opportunity (something like that).

Anyway, just my version of the scene. Probably won't be like this...And I suck at backgrounds.

Did this after school for 3 days. about 2 hrs each day.